Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Time perspective and relationships

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Heading casing[edit]

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FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. For example, use:

==Cats and dogs==

rather than

==Cats and Dogs==

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:20, 1 September 2017 (UTC)

Topic development review and feedback

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Title, sub-title, TOC[edit]

  1. Good; topic title was needed; has been added

User page[edit]

  1. Created
  2. Used effectively

Social contribution[edit]

  1. Excellent

Section headings[edit]

  1. Simple, effective 2-level structure
  2. Perhaps consider highlighting the use of examples/case studies in some way e.g., a feature box

Key points[edit]

  1. Very good familiarity with key concepts and the topic demonstrated
  2. It could be useful to explore how TP can be used to deal with conflicts in relationships
  3. Also try to provide image captions that connect meaningfully to the point being made in the section; or images can potentially be used to provide examples
  4. Excellent use of table
  5. Good use of wiki links


  1. Use effectively and well captioned
  2. Figure 1 works well, but note for other images it may be useful to expand the default image size


  1. Very good
  2. Check APA style for books
  3. Use the new recommended format for dois -
  4. Do not include issue numbers for journals which are continuously numbered within a volume
  5. APA style - Note that a citation like (Zimbardo, Kewough & Boyd, 1997) should have a comma after the second author name


  1. Very well used
  2. See also
    1. Also link to the other 2017 TP chapter
  3. External links
    1. Consider adding the Zimbardo TED talk video

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 20:28, 12 October 2017 (UTC)