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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 20:28, 12 October 2017 (UTC) Hi I looked up book chapter --Rachel Zeng (discuss • contribs) 22:34, 18 October 2017 (UTC)and I think "time perspective research" section is bit too long for readers to read. And the "Balanced time perspective"section maybe can move into the "time perspective research" section, as it might help to understand the realationship between five dimentions of time perspective and blanced time perspective. Also maybe disucss how the five TPs and BTP affect our realationship, respectively. Some small error I found in the section of "What is Time Perspective?" like you have the bracket but no in-text references. Some hyperlink can try to add in your content too, for example person "Lewin" and The Zimbardo Time Perspective Inventory. Hope this help, all the best. --Rachel Zeng (discuss • contribs) 22:34, 18 October 2017 (UTC) Hi there, thanks for the response it's very helpful. And i looked up chapter it looks very good and I can't think of any feedback about the content but i think you can try add some boxes to let the reader more easy to follow. all the best for the chapter. --Rachel Zeng (discuss • contribs) 08:54, 22 October 2017 (UTC)
Audio was a little quiet - it was OK to listen to at maximum volume. Perhaps it was recorded with an on-board microphone rather than a headset microphone - or perhaps the microphone was a little too far away
Include the title and sub-title to match the book chapter