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Overall, this is an excellent, HD-level chapter. It is clearly that an enormous amount of background reading has been done and importantly this has been effectively organised into a clear structure, with clearly established focus questions. There is wide condideration of theory and this is always related back to paraphilia and motivation. Research is reported in depth (perhaps too in depth in places). Practical implications are considered (e.g., treatment) and the chapter makes effective use of a case study and quiz questions. Little more could reasonably be expected. There are some relatively minor suggestions below about written expression.