Talk:Motivation and emotion/Textbook/Emotion/Neurobiology of aggression

Chapter feedback

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Overall This is an excellent chapter, on a challenging topic. It is very well researched, understood and explained in plain English (appropriate for the target audience). A balanced, indepth review of key literature is offered. The chapter is very well written, except for some relatively minor grammatical and proofreading errors. The chapter is well summarised. The quiz is excellent. Images and inter-wiki links were also provided appropriately. Theory Research Written expression Check use of ownership apostrophes e.g., one -> one's Check your sentences starting with "While" - they are not grammatically correct sentences. APA style Images were not captioned using APA style. Do not cite the year for subsequent citations within a paragraph e.g.,

Multimedia presentation feedback

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Overall 9 Overview Overall, this is a strong, all-around presentation which effectively communicated key understandings about the neurobiology of aggression. This was an important strength - choosing only to focus on key points and explaining these well. Well done on using a brief sound intro. Clear sound volume and quality. Slides are clear (min. font size should be no smaller - and maybe larger) Images were used to effectively complement the text. 2nd last slide was a bit hard to read. Great pronunciation of difficult words! Source of images weren't acknowledged. Content 9 Conclusion Audio 9 Video Meta-data 9 Licensing

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:58, 13 December 2010 (UTC)