Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Coercive control in intimate partner violence

Initial suggestions

@SoSilverLibby: Thanks for tackling this topic. Some initial suggestions:

• Check out related chapters and see how you can build on, link to, and integrate with them e.g., see these categories:
  • Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Domestic violence
  • Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Relationships
• What psychological theory(ies) can help to understand and explain this topic?
• What is the main research about this topic?

Let me know if I can do anything else to support the development of this chapter. Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:04, 6 August 2024 (UTC)

Hi James

I have accidentally deleted your contributions / links to your initial suggestions at the bottom of my page.

Can you help me with getting them back please?

Thank you

Bronwyn (SoSilverLibby u960569) SoSilverLibby (discuss • contribs) 03:20, 13 August 2024 (UTC)

@SoSilverLibby: They still seem to be there. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:20, 2 September 2024 (UTC)

Heading casing

Hi SoSilverLibby. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:20, 2 September 2024 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:20, 2 September 2024 (UTC)

Hello!

Thank you for tackling such an intense, and important topic that seems so prevalent in our times. For your topic I would recommend (if you have not already) looking intro the book 'Why does he do that?" as it pertains to domestic violence, and I would the book to be a haorriowing and informative read. Look over your chapter, I have noticed a few touches that could be made, for starters, I would recommend increasing the image size so as that would make it more readable. I would say your casestudy, while it is good, is too long anbd/or should be moved somewhere else throughout the chapter.

Thank you for your hard work! And good luck Joan-E-1405 (discuss • contribs) 07:36, 29 September 2024 (UTC)