Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2022/Indigenous Australian emotionality

Suggested article

Here is a new article that may be of interest: https://www.annualreviews.org/doi/abs/10.1146/annurev-psych-012921-045304---- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:21, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

Also checkout the new headspace resources on Indigenous youth mental health. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:25, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:05, 3 October 2022 (UTC)

Helpful videos

Hey there,

I am unsure whether you had the chance to look at the "yarning about" videos shared in the professional evidence unit this semester but I thought I should leave them here with you in case you hadn't. These videos discuss myths and the adversity that Indigenous Australians still face today from a UC perspective. These insightful videos bring up some points that relate to emotionality in Indigenous Australians and might therefore be helpful for your book chapter. I hope this helps :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BTYf8-G95AE

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bI65XDG-eAk&feature=youtu.be

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t94wK-L_x3k

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WgXYt-Tbg7E

Good luck !! U3210431 (discuss • contribs) 22:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)