Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Synthetic cannaboids and emotion

Heading casing

FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings (or sentence casing). For example, use: ==Cats and dogs== rather than ==Cats and Dogs== -- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:47, 29 September 2019 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

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Title and sub-title Capitalisation of the title/sub-title has been corrected to be consistent with the book table of contents Authorship details removed - authorship is as per the page's editing history Signed user name to topic in book table of contents User page Created Description about self Add internal link to book chapter Social contribution Summarised with indirect links to evidence. Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions. Section headings Promising 2-level heading structure - could benefit from further development to refine the structure. Avoid having sections with 1 sub-heading - use 0 or 2+ sub-headings. See earlier comment about Heading casing. Sections which include sub-sections should also include an overview paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings. Avoid providing too much background information. Briefly summarise generic concepts and provide internal wiki links to further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title. Key points Overview - Consider adding: focus questions. an image. a case study. Lack of citation. Basic development of key points for some sections, with relevant citations. Some sections are blank. Consider including more examples/case studies. Consider embedding one quiz question per major section. Image An image (figure) is presented. Caption uses APA style. Cite each figure at least once in the main text. References Weren't cited. For full APA style, use: correct capitalisation correct italicisation the new recommended format for dois no issue numbers for journals which are continuously numbered within a volume (i.e., most of them). Resources See also Good External link changed to internal link External links Use bullet-points No need for self-help links; target an international audience

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:47, 29 September 2019 (UTC)