Added in an addition internal link to a previous chapter written regarding the stolen generation and emotion. Might have some good resources to have a look into as well. --Briannathefox (discuss • contribs) 05:53, 7 September 2019 (UTC)
Hi there, I am researching vicarious post-traumatic growth for my book chapter. It is the phenomenon of positive change and growth as a result of indirect exposure to trauma and accounts of traumatic experiences. I wonder if there is any research focused on positive outcomes for younger generations based on storytelling from elders in relation to stolen generation experiences and the like? It might be an interesting alternate outcome or view worth exploring. A balance of sorts? Good luck with your chapter. All the best. --Elle o you jay (discuss • contribs) 11:21, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
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--CaraDillon (discuss • contribs) 07:51, 20 October 2019 (UTC)Hey, such an interesting topic you have chosen! It seems like you have researched it thoroughly and have a good grasp of such a complex, multifaceted issue. I see that you haven't added in any pictures yet, you may prefer the minimalist look but if you're thinking of adding any in last minute images I've had a look on wiki commons for some pictures you could use: