Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Performance enhancing drug usage motivation in elite athletes
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Hi, very well structured and thought through chapter. Makes reading very interesting. References all look good - well done. The only value I can add is that you may want to look at the table title - I restructured mine so that they aligned with APA format. However, I will leave that with you to consider. U109993 (discuss • contribs) 23:52, 19 October 2016 (UTC)
Hi! I've just added a couple "wiki-links" to your page and another one in the "see also" section, just to help out with the "interactive learning" criteria of the assessment. Hope you don't mind. Regards, Dana--U3096943 (discuss • contribs) 09:11, 8 October 2016 (UTC)
The definitions for use in the chapter are a nice touch! i feel like some general edits are needed in the overview section :) well done! HomerIncognito (discuss • contribs) 06:35, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
This chapter looks great so far! I've just added to my watch list as my topic is also drug related, so I thought we may be able to exchange some ideas later down the track. You look like you've made a great start though and I look forward to seeing more to come. --U3100481 (discuss • contribs) 02:42, 20 September 2016 (UTC)
Heading formatting[edit source]
Just use the standard formatting for headings (e.g., no italics or bold), to help ensure consistency across the chapters. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:52, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
Image contribution[edit source]
Hi I added an image of Lance Armstrong at the Tour de France, in the Risk taking section. Thought it might be useful. Cheers, --Muzz2016 (discuss • contribs) 07:36, 30 September 2016 (UTC)
Thanks Muzz2016 It fits in well with that section. U3115468 (discuss • contribs) 01:11, 5 October 2016 (UTC)
Overview[edit source]
The Overview presents a single case-study, which is helpful, but more importantly the Overview needs to describe the problem and how psychology theory/research is relevant to addressing the problem. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:42, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
Structure[edit source]
Are all these sections meant to be within the Theories section?
- Self-determination theory
- Achievement goal theory
- Task-oriented (mastery) goals
- Ego-oriented (performance) goals
- Motivational climate
- Theory of planned behaviour
-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:44, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:50, 16 November 2016 (UTC)
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