I cant tell what direction your taking yet but i just thought I would mention that Cloningers, biosocial model of personality and the temperament and character inventory- temperament has been linked with habit formation and maintenance. Here is one journal that talks about it Cloninger, C. R. (1994). Temperament and personality. Current opinion in neurobiology, 4(2), 266-273.. - i hope that helps --U3080948 (discuss • contribs) 05:40, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
Your chapter has a lot of great content so far, can I suggest adding more pictures to break it up a bit? and some pretty boxes! They make it look pretty :). Just watch some of your punctuation and grammar, make sure to proof read everything before you submit! also in your section called video games "I think most of us would be able to relate to hearing our mum's yelling at our younger siblings to "get off the xbox and go and play outside"." this statement is a little too informal, I would advise against using first person. Perhaps try something like [In today's society, most young people can relate to hearing their mothers stern voices to "get off the xbox! go play outside!" as an memorable part of childhood.]
Just be weary of statements like these throughout your chapter, but you have covered a lot of great content :) good luck with the rest!--U3100166 (discuss • contribs) 11:17, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
Too much informational content is presented - be more selective and use more examples - e.g., work backwards from 3 take-home messages to work out what content needs to be presented - and then focus on only that which is essential to conveying these messages.
Theory rich; basic coverage of research.
Addresses a self-help theme.
Include citations and references.
Take-home messages / key points are well summarised.