Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Emotional Freedom Techniques

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Hello, looks like a very interesting topic. I see that you might include a case study, I think that is a great idea and will help to communicate in an engaging and comprehensive way who these techniques may be useful for, how psychological theories underpin these techniques and how they might be used in everyday life Good Luck U3100474 (discusscontribs) 04:22, 14 October 2015 (UTC)u3100474


Hi! This chapter is looking well researched and it looks like you have covered all your bases so far ! I thought that perhaps you might consider altering your layout a bit. For example in terms of your evidence section, maybe space each topic out more or place them in boxes. I think this may help with the ease of reading through the content. But you may have already decided to do this when you get the chance ! Good Luck U3100230 (discusscontribs) 06:21, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

So I'm just going to put it out there, this may possibly one of the best book chapters I have read! It was engaging, appealing and informative. I love the interactive gif's and relatable information presented. A consideration to make may be rearranging the order in which its presented. The intro to emotions and their theories is informative however it seems like a long time until EFT is explained thoroughly. Maybe consider placing the theories after the intro to EFT? It may also be beneficial to relate emotional theories back to EFT, and their importance/place in EFT itself. Keep up the good work! --U3096856 (discusscontribs) 02:46, 31 October 2015 (UTC)


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Overall[edit source]

  1. Overall, this is a fantastic chapter which makes effective use of the wiki environment and provides an integrated, indepth, but very readable synthesis of psychological theory and research on the topic.
  2. The chapter is over the maximum word-count.
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Theory[edit source]

  1. Very impressive coverage of theory.

Research[edit source]

  1. Excellent, detailed review of research, with a balanced, critical perspective.
  2. The Reeve (2009) textbook is over-used as a citation; preferably consult and cite primary, peer-reviewed sources.

Written expression[edit source]

  1. The quality of written expression is excellent.
  2. Tables and/or Figures are used effectively.
  3. The chapter makes excellent use of interwiki links.
  4. Spelling, grammar, and proofreading are excellent.
  5. Direct quotes need page numbers.
  6. The APA style for the reference list is very good; remove issue numbers for seriated journals.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:16, 30 November 2015 (UTC)


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Overall[edit source]

  1. Overall, this is an excellent all-round presentation.

Structure and content[edit source]

  1. Well structured.
  2. Theory and research are well covered.

Communication[edit source]

  1. Audio is clear and well-paced.
  2. Varied intonation adds interest and engagement.
  3. Visuals are clear and easy to read.
  4. The combination of animated images and text is very effective.

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  1. Overall, very well produced.
  2. Rename the title so that it includes the subtitle (and matches the book chapter).
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 20:50, 2 December 2015 (UTC)