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Overall, this is a reasonable chapter which could be improved by more closely focusing on the emotional aspects of the topic (as per unit/book theme) and more proofreading. A strength of the chapter is the practical emphasis on how to prevent and improve the mental health and well-being of the target population.
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Research coverage was reasonable, but depth could be improved.
When describing important research studies, provide some indication of the nature of the sample and possibly cultural context.
When discussing important research findings, indicate the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.
Some statements were unreferenced (e.g., see the [factual?] tags)
Several very useful/relevant research studies are described. They tend to be described one after the other. To improve the review of research, look for patterns and themes and try to synthesise the findings in order to convey a greater depth of understanding.
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