Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Alcohol addiction and emotion
Make sure to do more than 2 sub-headings for each heading. I know James Neil told us to do that in tutorials :)
Hey there. Your topic looks really interesting. You may consider adding the cultural elements of drinking, especially in a country like Australia where alcohol is abundantly sold at virtually every social event. It may be difficult for those addicted. All the best with your writing, --David James Stevenson (discuss • contribs) 07:19, 24 September 2015 (UTC)
Hello I have a definition for you to add Alcohol is defined as 'any compounds in which a hydroxyl group, -OH is attached to a sataurate carbon atom R3COH' (McNaught & Wilkinson, 1997). Addiction is ......
Additional theories you could discuss are alcohol myopia, attention-allocation hypothesis and the Drive theory.
Reference : McNaught, A. & Wilkinson, A. (1997) IUPAC. Compendium of Chemical Terminology, 2nd ed. (the "Gold Book"). Blackwell Scientific Publications, Oxford. doi:10.1351/goldbook.
I found some interesting information that crosses into your selected topic, which is the James Lange theory in association to Alcohol and emotions. Although this article has a number of authors, James Lange looks more into defining binge-drinking quantities through resulting BACS, and the motivations of binge drinkers. It could be worth a look ☺
College binge drinking: what is it? Who does it? http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/12045482
If you look it up on the University of Canberra library page you can get access to it.
Hey! This book chapter is fantastic and really informative. Well done! Don't forget to add hyperlinks where you can, as James suggested that can be the factor that pushes a chapter from a Distinction to a High Distinction. Let me know if you'd like me to go ahead and do some for you! U3048330 (discuss • contribs)
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- The presentation now better focuses on the relationship between emotion and alcohol addiction.
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- The Conclusion claims a "strong link" but there is a lack of cited evidence to support this claim.
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