Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Suicide prevention

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Heading casing[edit source]

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FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. For example, use:

==Cats and dogs==

rather than

==Cats and Dogs==

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:58, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

Multimedia feedback

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Overall[edit source]

  1. Overall, ...

Structure and content[edit source]

  1. Content is somewhat informative about suicidality treatment but doesn't seem to address the specific question which is about how our client motivations utilised in suicide prevention programs.

Communication[edit source]

  1. Slides were OK.

Production quality[edit source]

  1. URL not working; .ppt slides were emailed to convener; the presentation isn't available online.
  2. No working audio was provided with the slides.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:30, 4 December 2014 (UTC)

Chapter review and feedback

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Overall[edit source]

  1. Overall, this was a solid, promising, well-researched chapter.
  2. For more feedback, see these copyedits and comments below.

Theory[edit source]

  1. The argument presented for using Maslow's hierarchy of needs to explain suicidality is weak. The model is presented, discounted on the basis on a large study, then used in a speculative argument. Remove this section.
  2. The rest of the structure and coverage of theories behind treatments is excellent.

Research[edit source]

  1. Relevant research is well described and integrated.
  2. When describing important research findings, indicate the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.

Written expression[edit source]

  1. Written expression
    1. This chapter is well over the 4500 maximum word count.
  2. Layout
    1. See earlier comments about heading casing
    2. Use Heading Level 2, then Level 3, etc.
    3. Coloured boxes were removed to aid readability; keep the style simple (e.g., as per Wikipedia articles)
  3. Learning features
    1. Images and tables were not used; An image was uploaded without sufficient information about copyright, so this has been removed.
    2. The text could become more interactive by including interwiki links.
  4. APA style
  5. et al -> et al.
    1. The reference list is not in full APA style.
    2. Remove issue numbers for seriated journal references.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:06, 4 December 2014 (UTC)