Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Pets and motivation
Add topicReally like your start to the topic so far
[edit source]I made a few minor grammatical changes that helped with the overall flow of the more complete paragraphs. I really like your use of anecdotes and examples, and I think you're really on track with this topic - keep it up.
Joelthebaws (discuss • contribs)
I have added in a study about equine therapy and children with autism. I am so glad you have put in equine therapy as someone who rides horses and has witnessed the effects of Pegasas. Such a great topic to read!! U3081461 (discuss • contribs) 08:15, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
Heading casing
[edit source]FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. For example, use:
==Cats and dogs== |
APA style captions for images and tables
[edit source]I recommend using APA style captions i.e., Figure 1, Figure 2 etc. for all images, graphs etc. and Table 1, Table 2 etc. for all tables. The caption text should not be in italics. For more detail and examples, see http://libguides.newcastle.edu.au/content.php?pid=113807&sid=1208571 -- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:35, 23 October 2014 (UTC)
Really Interesting! Coloured Text Boxes...
[edit source]Hey! Your topic is really interesting, I've enjoyed reading it :) I saw something on Moodle earlier today regarding coloured text boxes, I'm not 100% sure about it but apparently it isn't correct APA formatting. Maybe double check just in case! :) --121.223.187.104 (discuss) 10:22, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
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Overall[edit source]Overall, this presentation is very nicely put together. Well done! The structure is good, with a nice flow throughout. Theory and research are well integrated, however could have been referred to more directly in areas. The concluding slide was a useful inclusion. An introductory slide, outlining the presentation, would be beneficial. Communication is very well done. The voice-over is well-paced, with very engaging expression and appropriate pauses between sentences and slides - well done! Good use of examples. Pictures, video links and figures are used effectively throughout. Although, some figures are too small. Slightly less text could have been included on some slides. Production tools used are simple but effective. Quality of audio and visuals are both very good. The presentation had a professional feel. A link to the book chapter is provided. Indication of copyright license is not provided. ShaunaB - Talk |
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