Overall, Jing created a simple but effective visual presentation, well done. For improvement, the pace between slides could be slightly quicker, and the use of a case study or real life example might help to further engage the viewer
Visual quality was sound, however the sound quality had some issues. Relevant link, licensing and referencing must also be included, thus this presentation likely violates copyright law. Courtney.Bruce (discuss • contribs) 03:46, 23 November 2014 (UTC)
Obtaining comments on a chapter plan and/or chapter draft could have helped to improve the chapter.
The Overview is quite general; it would benefit by becoming more specific e.g., by establishing some focus questions and/or providing an example/case study. Similarly, the Conclusion lacks precision - e.g., what are the take-home messages about neuroticism and emotion.
Some paragraphs were overly long. Each paragraph should communicate one key idea in three to five sentences.