Hi, I read through your text and think you're off to a good start. Your paragraph is a little bit confusing for me, but this may simply be a case of missing a comma or two. It would be good if you could rephrase and make it a little clearer for your audience. All the best, and look forward to reading more of your chapter as you build it up U3083503 (discuss • contribs) 00:55, 29 September 2014 (UTC)Reply[reply]
A well designed and organised presentation. The content provides a good overall coverage of goal conflict and related research, but it could be improved by integrating more theory and by focusing more directly on the impact of emotions and affective consequences. Perhaps an overview slide or initial explanation of the presentation's structure would be helpful to the viewer who isn't sure what will be covered. The relationship between goal conflict and goal setting (slide towards the end) wasn’t clear. A conclusion slide with take-home messages could have been useful.
Communication is good and the visual presentation is basic but effective. Vocal intonation is good; the voice is easy and interesting to listen to, and is generally well-paced. There was a tendency to read out the text on some slides. The presentation displayed good use of illustrative examples but a more engaging presentation style could have been used. More use of images could help to make the presentation more interesting.
The presentation had clear picture and audio quality and demonstrated effective use of a basic screencast to communicate ideas. The presentation could have been improved in quality if the script had been mistake free (rehearsed some more). No copyright license is provided for the presentation. No image attributions are provided. No link is provided to the book chapter. A link is provided from the book chapter to the presentation. No reference list was provided.