Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Eating disorder recovery and motivation
Helpful reference[edit source]
I stumbled across your topic and I am very interested in seeing how your chapter pans out. This topic kinda hits close to home (not because of me) so it would be interested to see what you find out. This being said, I did find an article that may be useful to you in terms of your research. http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0272735898000129
Also, im not sure what your plans are in terms of structure for your chapter but it would be neat if you were able to provide information on the resistance to change their habits. The from that discuss therapeutic methods in relation to that? Just an idea.
Hi there, I found an interesting basic reference which might be of use for your overview: http://web.a.ebscohost.com/ehost/detail/detail?vid=4&sid=b21b55e5-77a9-4785-8406-67e5986de011%40sessionmgr4002&hid=4204&bdata=#db=a9h&AN=97956248. Here's the citation as well: Campbell, K., & Peebles, R. (2014). Eating Disorders in Children and Adolescents: State of the Art Review. Pediatrics, 134(3), 582-592. doi:10.1542/peds.2014-0194
Look forward to reading the end result!
Article about assessing motivation to change in eating disorders.[edit source]
Hey, looks like a interesting topic! looking forward to reading it when you're done. I found an article which reviews the ways we can measure motivation to change in eating disorder patients. Not sure if it's the sort of thing you'd be interested in, but thought it might be worth sharing it with you! http://zh9bf5sp6t.search.serialssolutions.com/?ctx_ver=Z39.88-2004&ctx_enc=info%3Aofi%2Fenc%3AUTF-8&rfr_id=info:sid/summon.serialssolutions.com&rft_val_fmt=info:ofi/fmt:kev:mtx:journal&rft.genre=article&rft.atitle=Assessing+motivation+to+change+in+eating+disorders%3A+a+systematic+review&rft.jtitle=Journal+of+eating+disorders&rft.au=Hoetzel%2C+Katrin&rft.au=von+Brachel%2C+Ruth&rft.au=Schlossmacher%2C+Lena&rft.au=Vocks%2C+Silja&rft.date=2013&rft.eissn=2050-2974&rft.volume=1&rft.spage=38&rft_id=info:pmid/24999416&rft.externalDocID=24999416¶mdict=en-US
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i thought it might be interesting if you talked about maybe the new obsession with clean eating and bodybuilding and how they do not eat in a 'healthy way' even though its not classed as a eating disorder. also recently on the abc for mental health week they ha documentaries on people recovering form eating disorders and what struggles they face in trying to gain weight and how they must do so in order to be supported my treatment programs http://www.abc.net.au/tv/programs/diaries-of-a-broken-mind/ --Hynes08 (discuss • contribs) 01:46, 21 October 2014 (UTC)
Article for change and a directional point[edit source]
I found this article and thought it might be of some use to you and your topic. I did notice that you have an older article that is on the same/similar topic, and thought as this one is more recent, it may have more, or even, recent/fresher research and conclusions in it: http://web.a.ebscohost.com.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/ehost/detail/detail?vid=4&sid=5b122d4d-1df7-4b89-9802-4707db13d0b2%40sessionmgr4005&hid=4112&bdata=#db=pdh&AN=2013-15697-001
Also, in terms of the motivation to and for recovery, I was thinking maybe looking at how the support of family members and friends may impact, or could impact, on one's motivation to recovery? And if the amount of education and understanding the family and friends has regarding eating disorders and recovery, has an impact or effect on the individual's recovery and motivation to do so? Just some ideas. U3084341 (discuss • contribs) 00:31, 23 October 2014 (UTC)
I recommend using APA style captions i.e., Figure 1, Figure 2 etc. for all images, graphs etc. and Table 1, Table 2 etc. for all tables. The caption text should not be in italics. For more detail and examples, see http://libguides.newcastle.edu.au/content.php?pid=113807&sid=1208571 -- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:17, 23 October 2014 (UTC)
General feedback[edit source]
- Informative of how eating disorders can develop in regard to social expectations.
- The chapter feels as though it has been written by a scholar who may not have experienced an eating disorder and is purely writing from knowledge of the subject rather then experience in the subject. This would be acceptable if more specific experiences were mentioned, however, it is more of a clinical ‘out of the book’ style of writing.
- Self-determination theory discussed as apart of ED recovery. Well examined and informative to the reader.
- Various eating disorders defined and discussed, however, each eating disorder is different as well as the people that experience them. Some of the information is very general and the person reading would certainly need to search for the more specific information, if required.
- Clinical in its approach to giving advice / information. I think more examples would have been helpful. Given the prevalence of eating disorders a number of readers may have suffered.
- Focused on statistics and less on experiences in the development of eating disorders
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