Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Belongingness motivation
Hey there, I haven't had a chance to read your chapter just yet, just quickly glanced over it, but I've noticed that you have not added any in-text links to other wiki pages. For example Maslow's hierarchy of needs, Social identity theory, Belongingness etc.
You also my want to add a few external links or links to other book chapters from previous years or the current year under the headings "External links" and "See also" respectively.
- Maybe a youtube video here
- Or some interesting article
- Or blog or something
|FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. For example, use:|
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Overall, this is a good presentation. Well done!
The structure is good, with a nice flow throughout. Theory and research are well integrated. The practical focus of the 'Approaches to coping with Rejection' slide was a strength. A concluding slide was included, but no introductory overview was provided. This could have included the content of the presentation, including the theories discussed.
Information is articulated well through the voice-over and slides. A good amount of information is provided using both methods. The voice-over is generally well-paced, with intonation and appropriate pauses between sentences and slides. The inclusion of images made the presentation more engaging. Use of more illustrative examples would be beneficial.
Production tools used are simple but effective. Audio volume is very low, has a slight echo and the ending was cut off. Quality of visuals is good. The lines on the slide background are somewhat distracting from the text. A link to the book chapter is provided. No indication of copyright license is provided. ShaunaB - Talk
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