Hey, I'm doing my chapter on cultural influences on aggression. In my research I came across this article http://link.springer.com/article/10.1007%2Fs10896-013-9505-1 The study investigates physical aggression between partners in a cultural context. I thought it may be of some benefit to your research. The article can be accessed in full from the UC library databases. Hope you find it of some interest! U3053066 (discuss • contribs) 14:48, 5 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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Overall, this is a basic presentation which is significantly undermined by the key issue that the content of this presentation doesn't match with the agreed chapter title.
Start the chapter by explaining the underlying research question
It is unclear why this presentation incorporates such a major focus on SDT. It is not part of the designated topic and isn't covered in the book chapter.
There is too little explanation of IPV - what is it?
There is too little focus on IPV
There was no Conclusion
The presentation was based on two references by the same author; use a wider range of sources
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Overall, this would be a reasonable chapter if it is focused on addressing the agreed topic.
The agreed topic was "Aggression in intimate relationships - How does aggression influence abusive behaviour in intimate relationships?" rather than "The Role of aggression in intimate partner violence: Various Antecedents, Influences and Interventions"
Research specific to aggression in IPV is not really covered; most of the material is around the contribution of personality and other predictors of IPV.
When describing important research findings, indicate the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.