Hey Jess, this is a fantastic chapter! You obviously put a lot of hard work into it. I think I need to get my SMART TIME happening for my motivation in general! :) It would certainly be useful for a lot of things. - Jus Jaybay 12:39, 21 November 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for the excellent information (I needed it) - the statistics were also interesting - your research was great - Magnolia28
Overall, this is an impressive chapter. It conveys a very readable and well constructed self-help message around the motivational aspects of weight-loss, and makes effective use of theory and research. The main area for improvement are some aspects of written expression.
Overall, this is a solid, basic presentation, using text slides with narrated audio. The emphasis on the problem and take-home messages is excellent, with very well researched content. Perhaps be more selective about which content to cover, to allow for slower narration and perhaps the inclusion of some examples e.g., case study?