Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2022/Physical and psychological needs

Heading casing

FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:24, 18 September 2021 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

The topic development has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Topic development marks are available via UCLearn. Note that marks are based on what was available before the due date, whereas the comments may also be based on all material available at time of providing this feedback.

Title The title is correctly worded and formatted The sub-title is correctly worded and formatted User page Excellent - used effectively Description about self provided, with links to professional profiles Link provided to book chapter Social contribution Summarised with indirect link(s) to evidence Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions. Headings See earlier comment about Heading casing Overall, well developed Avoid having sections with 1 sub-heading - use 0 or 2+ sub-headings Consider simplifying to a 2-level rather than 3-level heading structure Key points Limited development - Overview is excellent, but key points for the rest are lacking Use bullet points (see Tutorial 1 - Using Wikiversity) For sections which include sub-sections include key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. Conclusion (the most important section): hasn't been developed what might the take-home, practical messages be? in a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions? Figure A figure is presented Caption uses APA style Cite each figure at least once in the main text References Good For APA referencing style, check and correct: capitalisation doi formatting Resources Good Use bullet-points

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