Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Orthorexia and emotion

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Hi, I find this topic really interesting as I haven't heard of orthorexia before. My book chapter is about intuitive eating, which is a non-diet approach used with patients who suffer from eating disorders. It focuses on listening to internal cues of hunger and satiety, building a healthy relationship with food and removing guilt associated with eating. I think these two topics tie together well. I understand orthorexia is a relatively new term and not recognised in the DSM-5 yet, which might explain why I couldn't find any studies using intuitive eating practices with those who suffer from orthorexia. I think your chapter may benefit from a mention of intuitive eating in a further research section and discuss how this approach may be helpful for those who suffer from orthorexia. I look forward to reading your chapter! --BirdU3171984 (discuss • contribs) 03:32, 13 October 2020 (UTC)

FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for sentence casing. For example, the wikitext should be: == Cats and mice == rather than == Cats and Mice == -- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:45, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

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Title and sub-title Very good Capitalisation of the title has been corrected to be consistent with the book table of contents User page Excellent - used effectively Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. Social contribution Excellent - summarised with direct link(s) to evidence. Section headings Overly complicated 4-level structure - try simplifying and expanding as a 2-level structure. Aim for 3 to 6 top-level headings between the Overview and Conclusion, with up to a similar number of sub-headings for large sections. Avoid having sections with 1 sub-heading - use 0 or 2+ sub-headings. See earlier comment about Heading casing. Key points Very limited development of theory, research, and interactive/practical aspects of the topic: "What are the emotional risk factors and consequences of orthorexia?" Overview - Consider adding: a description of the problem and what will be covered focus questions an image an example or case study Remove or adapt generic template content. Avoid providing too much background information. Briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal wiki links to other book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content of this chapter on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. Consider including more examples/case studies. Conclusion (the most important section): hasn't been developed what might the take-home, practical messages be? in a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question in the sub-title? Image Excellent Cite each figure at least once in the main text. References 2 out out 3 look like good sources - move the non-peer reviewed sources to the external links section For APA referencing style, check and correct: spacing capitalisation italicisation dois should be active hyperlinks Resources Excellent See also Also link to relevant book chapters External links Use bullet-points Include source in brackets after link Target an international audience; Australians only represent 0.33% of the world population

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:45, 21 September 2020 (UTC)