Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Eudaimonia

Heading casing

FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for sentence casing. For example, the wikitext should be: == Cats and mice == rather than == Cats and Mice == -- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:07, 13 September 2020 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

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Title and sub-title Excellent User page Created Minimal Consider linking to your eportfolio Link provided to book chapter Social contribution Summarised with direct link(s) to evidence. Section headings Top-level headings are appropriate. Basic, 2-level heading structure - could benefit from further development. See earlier comment about Heading casing. I'm not convinced that Maslow's hierarchy of needs is amongst the top/most relevant theories relating to this topic, although self-actualisation definitely warrants mention. Perhaps consider looking more closely at Seligman and colleagues' work on happiness and eudaimonia. Key points Overview - Consider adding: an image. an example or case study. Remove or adapt generic template content. Basic development of key points for some sections, with relevant citations. Theory is stronger - there less evidence that there is a good familiarity with relevant research. Key points are well developed for each section, with relevant citations. Historical context is relevant, but also ensure that the chapter covers contemporary understanding of relevant theory and research. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. Consider including more examples/case studies. Conclusion (the most important section) hasn't been developed. Image An image (figure) is presented. Caption uses APA style. explains how the image connects to key points being made in the main text. Figure(s) are cited at least once in the main text. References Good. For APA referencing style, check and correct: capitalisation Resources Very good External links - include source in brackets after link

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:07, 13 September 2020 (UTC)