Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Play motivation

Questions

• What are your favourite games?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• What do you love to play?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• Why do you play?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• What keeps you playing?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• What is the biological function of play?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• Do children and adults play differently?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• Is play fundamental to development?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• Is play essential to learning?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• What is gamification?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• Are games addictive?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• Is play changing as it goes online?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• Does online play fulfill the same function as traditional play?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• What therapeutic value does play have?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 03:53, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
• Is there a darker side to play?--Ninaq9 (discuss • contribs) 04:52, 29 August 2017 (UTC)

Heading casing

FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. For example, use: ==Cats and dogs== rather than ==Cats and Dogs== -- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:34, 17 October 2017 (UTC)

Topic development review and feedback

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Title, sub-title, TOC Excellent User page Created Used effectively Social contribution None summarised with links to evidence Section headings See earlier comments about heading casing Basic, 1-level heading structure - would benefit from further development, perhaps using a 2-level structure. Make sure to avoid providing too much background/generic material. Instead briefly summarise background concepts and provide wiki links to further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question posed by the sub-title of chapter. Key points Brief key points provided for each section, but lacking in detail and would benefit from further development, including citations Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles. Consider including more examples/case studies. Consider embedding one quiz question per major section rather than having one longer quiz towards the end. Image Two images embedded Consider increasing image size from default Consider enhancing figure captions to help connect the image more strongly to key points being made in the text References Only one reference provided For full APA style: Use correct italicisation Resources See also Excellent External links Rename the links so that they are more meaningful

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:34, 17 October 2017 (UTC)