Talk:Microbiome and Mental Health

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Quick takes April 2020 version[edit source]

Wow, this looks excellent! I would like to figure out a format for the figure files that doesn't look pixelated (PDF? PNG?). Maybe make the first funnel plot expanded and the rest collapsed, so that it's more obvious they exist and that there are more. The fuschia and magenta were for fun, but easy to switch to a more subdued palette if you want. What do you think about adding links to Wikipedia articles for relevant topics, like we did in the Bipolar & COVID paper? Well done! Eyoungstrom (discusscontribs) 02:56, 20 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

New deep thoughts[edit source]

Add pictures or graphics?

Update review

Add links to Wikipedia pages and resources

Great work!

Eyoungstrom (discusscontribs) 21:53, 13 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I added the category microbiology and the link ecosystem. These cause your excellent resource to be a content page! See by clicking on Page information in the left column. --Marshallsumter (discusscontribs) 03:11, 31 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Consider making a separate "References" section Emileekruchten (discusscontribs) 19:46, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

In the "History of the Gut Microbiome" section provide more history, and in the subsection "Acquisition and Development in Humans" add more to that subsection. These notes were on the page but to make it more presentable I just moved it to the Talk section Treas107 (discusscontribs) 19:48, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Consider making the citations in the "Nervous System Interaction" section match the rest of the document Emileekruchten (discusscontribs) 19:51, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Add more to the "Anxiety and Depression" section under "Microbiome and Mental Illness". This section does not give a thought out description of anxiety, but talks about stress.--Hrsams88 (discusscontribs) 19:55, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]