Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Morality and emotion

Book chapter focus question

• Consider a singular focus question only or adapt it
• Change in focus question requires submitted approval
• Throughout the chapter sub questions can also be implemented in addition to the focus question

Heading

• Original heading error has been fixed
• Consider using specific and relevant heading, and use where necessary.
• If a stand-out recognition is required, consider applying bold, underline and/or italics

Other notes

• Consider formatting and drafting prior to implementation
• Consider using commenting and/or discussion page to clean up and hide author notes
• If formatting and drafting is difficult, consider drafting in a word program before implementing on the web chapter

U3187226 (discuss • contribs) 09:48, 9 November 2020 (UTC)

Heading casing

FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for sentence casing. For example, the wikitext should be: == Cats and mice == rather than == Cats and Mice == -- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:42, 12 September 2020 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

The topic development has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Topic development marks are available via UCLearn. Note that marks are based on what was available before the due date, whereas the comments may also be based on all material available at time of providing this feedback.

Title and sub-title Excellent User page Created Description about self provided Link provided to book chapter Social contribution Summarised with indirect links to evidence. Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions. Section headings Promising 2-level heading structure - could benefit from further development. Appears to be a strong coverage of theory; less so for research See earlier comment about Heading casing. Sections which include sub-sections should also include an overview paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings. Key points Partly developed Overview - Consider adding: focus questions. an image. a case study. Use APA style for citations. Write using 3rd person perspective. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. Consider including more examples/case studies. Image An image (figure) was presented but appears to have been removed, probably due to a lack of information or copyright violation. Caption does not use APA style. Cite each figure at least once in the main text. References No APA style references listed. Resources See also Use internal wiki links Rename links so that they are more user friendly External links Rename links so that they are more user friendly Include source in brackets after link

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:42, 12 September 2020 (UTC)

Quizzes and boxes

Hi, great work so far. I would suggest adding some quizzes or boxes for your focus question to enhance your page. You can do this by editing the source on my page and copying the link from my focus box and quiz questions, then pasting it to your page. U3166897 (discuss • contribs) 11:30, 16 October 2020 (UTC)