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Ivory soap is 99 and 44/100% pure.

How does/Does purity relate to B Franklin's cleanliness?

So, in going back to your introduction, it occurred to me that it is not clear to me how you chose the virtues you've focused on. Also, your texts would be richer, I think, if you discussed the relationship of the virtue you are working with to the introductory material. You've got lists of other thinkers' ideas on this topic that are just kind of hanging here. -- From DB