Talk:Peak oil, energy, and society/Ian's page

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Ian, This is a great paragraph, very readable. I would say that your main (or best) point is more about the building-recycling (renovation) than about how popular solar panels are. So I would change the first sentence to introduce building renovation.


My goal is to make links on the main page by topic (not by your names) -- like, have a page named "Building recycling." If we do that, it would better to separate your paragraph into two paragraphs, one about renewable energy and one about renovation, and have two links.


I'll put up a link to show you what I mean. User:Megercliff, 01:20, 8 April 2008