Talk:Comparative law and justice/France

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You are doing a great job so far. Just a couple of things you might want to work on:

  • Your election info needs to include the use of the terms and concepts from class related to elections. You'll find a similar need to go back and work on the crime section in relation to terminology.
  • Your citations should visibly show the text of the URL in them, not just those brackety things.
  • Try to integrate the discussion about the sources of the crime statistics better into your overall discussion.
  • Your page is not signed.

Do look through the comments I send to the whole class--you'll find other things in there to help you improve your work.

Mlarthur 21:18, 20 October 2010 (UTC)