Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2023/Vulnerable dark triad, motivation, and emotion

Initial suggestions

@U3191574 (PHP): Thanks for tackling this topic. Some initial suggestions:

• Check out other related chapters and see how you can build on, link to, and integrate with that work:
  • Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Dark triad
• What psychological theories can help to understand? What is the main research in this area?

Let me know if I can do anything else as you go along. Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:58, 7 August 2023 (UTC)

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:19, 28 September 2023 (UTC)

Workplace motivation?

Hey! This seems super good so far! I not long did an essay for another unit on the dark triad! A good idea for the motivation aspect could be looking into social identity theory a little for things like the workplace and social settings. Good luck! :) U3224203 (discuss • contribs) 07:23, 8 October 2023 (UTC)