Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2023/Emotional intelligence training

Initial suggestions

@RolandC2023: Thanks for tackling this topic.

Note that there was a previous attempt, so check out that chapter and the feedback on its talk page.

Also check out other emotional intelligence chapters and see how you can build on, link to, and integrate with that work.

Let me know if I can do anything else as you go along.

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:08, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:29, 28 September 2023 (UTC)