Fiction writing/I survived the Boston Agela Palace Bombing, March 13, 1989

Chapter 5/The Bombing starts

Ma and Ronny were visiting the southeastern part of Haunted Tree, until Ronny spotted a few tall, bearded men, running into the Sesgoni Palace, like they were in a hurry to go to work.

“Mom? Are they Al-Taiba?” Ronny asked, while in fear for his life.
“Ronny, dear, Al-Taiba bombes near the Bailway area don’t get…” Mom stopped,
“What’s WRONG?” Ronny asked, quite scared as he looked in his mother’s eyes.
“Sweetie, they are Boco-Hurram” Mom said while running for her life, while carrying Ronny.
“But what…” Ronny stopped…
KABOOM!
A bomb exploded in one of the Sesgoni and Terongola Palaces. Ronny landed on the ground, hurt and afraid.
“Mom!!” Ronny said.
Ronny couldn’t hear a thing, with all the shrieking bombs and high army cars running.
BOOM!
A gunshot rang through his ears. Ronny scrambled to his feet, but didn’t stay till long until Mr. Jeorga came along…
KABOOM!
A huge explosion took place in Pearson, the Upper Publican Noble’s capital. Ronny couldn’t scream, he was more terrified,
“Come on! We need to go!” Jeorga said without waiting for a response. Jeorga stole an Al-Taiba car down in Segorsburg, near Bailway.
KABOOM!
This explosion made Ronny petrified, and bleeding badly on his body, mostly his legs. Ronny could see an Al-Taiba and Al-Shreik men running around with grenades. A grenade landed near Ronny.
“RUN!” Jeorga screamed, while pulling poor Ronny into the car and driving down to Fisher. Fisher is a city near the Sesgoni Palaces, where the bombs were…
About, estimated by Jeorga, 500 grenades exploded near Capital Dankson, where the military men were working. Horrible screams filled the air. Ronny thought for a minute about the terrorist groups that were attacking.
“Al-Taiba, Al-Shreik, Al-Finnati (Al-Finnati was a very small group) and Boco-Hurram” Ronny whispered to himself.
Wait a minute! Ronny thought. What the heck was Al-Shreik doing here?! It’s a Gresland Terrorist Group. Al-Shreik’s goal is to destroy Gresland, not UPPN!?
“Ah, Kabana Taracki! Salaja Na’Asphiba! Rattata Min, huckashi! Billahi wal Ordaha! Min ZAK!?” An Al-Taiba terrorist screamed.
Ah, bring atomic bomb! We are going to bomb this palace! Bring 600 grenades! Fight any police you see. Not know!? Ronny translated in his mind.
“Not know?”
KABOOM!
Waves of grenades were falling on a big tree, which collapsed to the ground, while hitting 9 Yamaguchi Palaces, which belonged to Japanese Angellians. “Jeorga!” Ronny called out,
But no response.
Ronny’s eyes were met with blood.
KABOOM!
Millions of grenades fell on the last five Yamaguchi Palaces. The UPPN Army abruptly jumped through the trees and started shooting. And then, Ronny had a sharp hit in the back…
It was Ronny’s back bleeding due to a bullet!
“Annati! Foorba! Kaban Taracki!” An Al-Taiba leader called out.
“Victory! Defeat! Bring atomic bomb!” Ronny translated.
“Noooooooo!” Ronny yelled until.
KABOOM!!!!!
The bomb was an atomic bomb, which landed in the heart of the Boston Agela Palace. The bomb was the loudest bomb Ronny ever heard. The bomb landed in the Boston Palace, and then a huge shriek came out. After, it was met with silent. While more than 900,000,000 bodies were down, bleeding on the surface of the Earth. When Ronny looked up, he could see more bodies falling.
What happened to Mom? Jeorga? The UPPN Army? The Al-Taibas and all those stupid terrorist groups?
Ronny started to cry, very loudly.
This atomic bomb was the last bomb. The aftermath was filled with great silent. With more than nine billion bodies dropping from the smoky sky. Wait? Were there that many people in the Boston Palace?

Not only did the atomic bomb destroy the Boston Palace, but it destroyed cities up till Lemtone, Chima.
What great depression it was.
“RONNY!” Mom screamed.
Their was that happy, beautiful mother. Covered with tears and blood.

Draft

Ma and Ronny were visiting the southeastern part of Haunted Tree, until Ronny spotted a few tall, bearded men, running into the Sesgoni Palace, like they were in a hurry to go to work.

“Mom? Are they Al-Taiba?” Ronny asked, while in fear for his life.

“Ronny, dear, Al-Taiba bombes near the Bailway area don’t get…” Mom stopped,

“What’s WRONG?” Ronny asked, quite scared as he looked in his mother’s eyes.

“Sweetie, they are Boco-Hurram” Mom said while running for her life, while carrying Ronny.

“But what…” Ronny stopped…

KABOOM!

The first few hundred grenades fall down on two very tall Yamachugi Palaces. Ronny jumps up like a tiger attacking his prey, and dives in, injuring his face! Ronny growns in pain.

"It's a terrorist attack!" Ronny yells out.

KABOOM!

A shock of earth rises up from the two Gerret Bombs, made a few centuries ago. Ronny ducks for cover behind a tree, but falls down on the thorns.

"Ronny!" Mr. Jeorga yelled out.

BOOM

500 bullets flee through Yamaguchi and Taranga Palaces. The UPPN Army was attacking! Only with a few tons of gunpowder and nine million bullets stored in 3000 guns. There is no way the UPPN Army would ever win!?

"Jeorga! Are you there?!" Ronny yells out.

KABOOM! KABOOM! KABOOM!!!

Those were 900 - 15000 bombs dropping on a huge tree, which fell out and crushed, burned, and destroyed 9 Yamaguchi Palaces. The Army rises, and nine hundred soldiers get shot, on both sides.