User talk:U3154928

Any feedback is very much appreciated. Thanks.

This topic development is looking great. I am very excited to read the finished chapter as the topic is relevant and interesting. There are two minor modifications I would make to this. The first is to combine Erikson's stages of psychosocial development and Devor's 14-stage model together into one. The second recommendation is to give the readers some guidance as to what you are going to talk about in your overview. For example, "this chapter will cover X, Y, and Z." Other than that, I can't fault it. Great work.--BB7897 (discuss • contribs) 03:33, 27 August 2018 (UTC)--BB7897 (discuss • contribs) 03:33, 27 August 2018 (UTC)

Book chapter on user page

Hi U3154928,

I noticed that your book chapter on gender fluidity motivation is currently appearing in your user page while the relevant book chapter link is empty. Hopefully this gives you enough time to transfer it over and fill the user page with some information about yourself and link to your chapter. --U3122470 (discuss • contribs) 03:10, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

Providing feedback

Thanks for providing feedback on book chapter talk pages. When doing so, here's some suggestions:

1. By convention, feedback is usually placed at the bottom of a talk page
2. Add a new heading for the feedback by adding something like == Feedback ==

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:51, 16 October 2018 (UTC)

Social contribution review and feedback

The social contributions listed on your user page have been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below. Marks will be available later via UCLearn, along with book chapter marks. Keep an eye on Announcements.

Feedback ~17 logged social contributions with somewhat direct links. Most of the contributions were in the week before chapters were due. Don't be afraid to just go ahead and make simple changes (e.g., add hanging indent).

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:43, 15 November 2018 (UTC)