Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2026/Mood and cognitive performance

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1. Title Title and/or subtitle not correctly worded and/or didn't use sentence casing (fixed) 2. Headings Promising 1-level heading structure – could benefit from further development (e.g., consider using subheadings) Excellent alignment between sub-title, focus questions, and heading structure Are the headings based on genAI content? If so, this needs to be acknowledged in the edit summaries, otherwise it violates academic integrity. 3. Overview Excellent – Scenario, image, evocative description of the problem/topic, and focus questions Very good Good Basic Insufficient Hasn't been developed – Needs scenario, image, evocative description of the problem/topic, and focus questions Does this section include genAI content? If so, it needs to be acknowledged as such in the edit summaries, otherwise it violates academic integrity. Promising scenario; could benefit from further development Add an image to the scenario to help attract reader interest A clear description of the problem/topic is planned or presented The focus questions are well aligned with the sub-title and top-level headings Use wiki-style bullet points (see Tutorial 2) 4. Key points Excellent – key points are well developed for each section Conclusion is well developed Do these key points include genAI content? If so, this needs to be acknowledged in the edit summaries, otherwise it violates academic integrity. 5. Figure Relevant figure(s) presented, captioned, and cited Add a figure to the scenario Figure caption(s) should include Figure X. ... Cite each figure in the main text just before or around where the figure appears Well done on creating and uploading your own image! —this can also be listed on your user page as a social contribution 6. Learning feature Add in-text interwiki links for first mention of key terms to Wikipedia and/or book chapters (see Tutorial 2) Promising use of scenarios/examples/case studies Promising use of quiz question(s) Promising use of table(s) 7. References Good Use primary sources rather than a textbook (Reeve, 2024) What are the most relevant systematic reviews/meta-analyses about this topic? Check and correct APA referencing style: italicisation 8. Resources See also To be developed (see Tutorial 2) External links One of two required external links provided Use sentence casing Basic Very brief description about self – consider expanding Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. A link to the book chapter is provided 9. User page No comment 10. Social contribution None summarised on user page with direct link(s) to evidence (see Tutorial 2). Looking ahead to the book chapter, see social contributions.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:16, 12 September 2026 (UTC)