Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2026/Exercise gamification motivation

Overview

Looking good. I would suggest discussing some of the literature in this section. I say this because in the template it says to outline "psychological science". Jack4234 (discuss • contribs) 08:14, 20 August 2026 (UTC)

Heading casing

Hi U3260591. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:01, 30 August 2026 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

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1. Title Title and subtitle are correctly worded and use sentence casing 2. Headings See earlier comment about heading casing Promising 1-level heading structure – could benefit from further development, perhaps using a 2-level structure (i.e., use subheadings) Excellent alignment between sub-title, focus questions, and heading structure 3. Overview Excellent – Scenario, image, evocative description of the problem/topic, and focus questions Reasonably good alignment between focus questions and heading structure, but consider closer alignment Solid development The scope is excellent (i.e., not too little/narrow or too big/broad) Select the best theories about this topic Select the best research about this topic Conclusion is underway What are the practical, take-home messages? (address the focus questions) 4. Key points No comment 5. Figure Relevant figure(s) presented, captioned, and cited Figure caption(s) should include Figure X. ... Cite each figure at least once in the main text using APA style (e.g., see Figure 1) 6. Learning feature Add in-text interwiki links for first mention of key terms to Wikipedia and/or book chapters (see Tutorial 2) Consider use of more scenarios/examples/case studies Consider including quiz question(s) about the take-home messages Also consider using tables to summarise key information 7. References Very good Well done on identifying relevant systematic reviews and/or meta-analyses Check and correct APA referencing style: capitalisation italicisation 8. Resources See also Very good Use internal link style for Wikipedia links (see Tutorial 2) External links Excellent Use bullet-points (see Tutorial 2) 9. User page Used effectively Brief description about self – consider expanding Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. A link to the book chapter is provided 10. Social contribution Excellent – at least three different types of contributions with direct link(s) to evidence The Wikiversity talk page link goes an edit rather than read interface

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:01, 30 August 2026 (UTC)