Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2019/Alcohol, dopamine, and emotion

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Hi,

I find your topic really interesting and thought might give you some research to support your topic. I can't really access the study but the abstract look interesting and related to your topic. It said motivation stimulus in the dopamine is stimulated by alcohol. Which in turn increase the repetitive behavior of alcohol consumption. I hope you find it useful. :) https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/15704345 (2nd Sept 2018, 22:00 PM) Khin1994

Hi! Your topic looks likes its going to be really interesting!! Can't wait to read all of it! I just fixed up your quiz so it works :) I think I've selected the right answers to be correct, if not just go in and edit it again and put a '+' in front of the correct answer. Also just edited your figures so that they are APA formated now :) Good luck!! --MaddieCarleton (discuss • contribs) 22:07, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

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Title, sub-title, TOC Very good User page OK Consider adding a link to the book chapter you are working on Social contribution Link doesn't go directly to evidence of contribution See suggestions for how to record social contributions Section headings Effective overall structure The "What is dopamine?" top-level headings isn't really needed - cover this concept briefly within the Overview or subsequent sections, with links to dedicated Wikiversity/Wikipedia resources for more info. This will allow the bulk of the structure to be focused on addressing the core topic (the chapter's sub-title). Key points Reasonably good development of key points Conclusion is underdeveloped - it is the most important section Image Good Consider making image sizes of these diagrams larger Use APA style References Good Use APA style Only include peer-reviewed references - other links should go in external links Resources See also - Good External links - None provided (the links that were here have now been moved to See also)

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