User talk:Thomas.Purcell/Dodgeball: A legitimate sport?
|Dodgeball- A Legitimate Sport|
|Copyright||Need to place the authors name under the photo|
|Referencing||Might be worth putting in the dates next to your references so the reader knows what year the information was published|
|Closing comments||A few more minor details to fix with your in text referncing, and the reference list but overall this is a very throughly researched essay. Well done! Alexavent 16:02, 31 October 2011 (UTC)|
|Presentation of Dodgeball|
|Closing comments||I must agree, one of the best movies ever! I liked the way you linked your presentation to this movie, as most people would have seen it and would have been able to relate to the jokes and images. I really enjoyed watching/listening to your presentation, the only aspect i was a little confused in was after the introduction the next 2 slides didnt exactly match what you were saying so i found myself looking at the slide and not listern to the information being spoken. Other than that it was a great topic and well presented. Reviewed by WatsonS 5th Nov 2011 8:30am|