User talk:SamN90/The Introduction of Change
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| The Introduction of Change | |
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| Author | Sam Noller |
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| Overall rating | 4/5 |
| Closing comments | Good presentation. Voice could be louder and more use of pictures needed, regardless great topic area and points covered.--Granado23 11:50, 2 November 2011 (UTC) |
| The Introduction of Change | |
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| Author | Sam Noller |
| Word count | 2237 excluding abstract |
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| Overall rating | 4/5 |
| Closing comments | Great layout and very informative topic. Article was well presented and topics discussed were well reviewed. Great effort.--Granado23 11:50, 2 November 2011 (UTC) |
Well done Sam, I like how on your Userpage you included a brief summary of your essay, good idea. I might see if I can encourage others to do that. I moved your essay page, to be a sub page to your Userpage. before, it was out in the Wikiversity's main space. The last sentence in your outline mentions the local to international scope, but the outline didn't really explain how you'd cover that scope. It's a specific and interesting topic however, sorry and work out how you'll cover the intersection of business and politics around your topic, from the local to international scale. Leighblackall 23:14, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
