Great choice of topic. How did the beautiful game allow simulation?
Wondered if you might look at Goffman's Stigma for an interesting theory about identity http://books.google.com.au/books?hl=en&lr=&id=zuMFXuTMAqAC&oi=fnd&pg=PA1&dq=Stigma+Goffman&ots=R7XpKuaKQc&sig=Ujm9drcdXBRGOqka4v4EZ4wPA5o#v=onepage&q&f=false
Postillion 11:31, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
|Word count||2300 (excluding references)|
|Closing comments||Overall, great essay and presentation. Easy to follow structure and nice flow when reading. However lacked a little in references. More references would have complemented the report better.SarahProudman 10.37, 3 November 2011 (UTC)|