User talk:Diego e/Have business and politics destroyed football?
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What a fascinating choice of topic! I am looking forward to your detailed analysis. Postillion 11:20, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Just a thought while passing in RecentChanges (I did not read the page yet, just some sentences in intro):
- But I was thinking first: not necessarily for kids who play in the neighbourhood
- Then I thought: Well, perhaps it did really: e.g. by giving less opportunities for children to play?
- I guess your scope is different than what I thought, ----Erkan Yilmaz uses the Wikiversity:Chat + Identi.ca 11:17, 25 October 2011 (UTC)
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| Have business and politics destroyed Football? | |
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| Author | Diego Elmoudawar |
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| Overall rating | 3.5/5/5 |
| Closing comments | Interesting topic, with a strong knowledge of the topic. Was a bit long for word count, however this does not deter from the quality of the essay and provides the reader the ability to understand what they are being informed of. (u3036219) |
