Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2013/Environmental behaviour

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Comments[edit source]

Hey as a starting point, i think that you would be able to link your chapter with behaviours in the workplace vs outside of the workplace and include some concepts of organisational behaviour etc. Thosecows (discusscontribs) 04:17, 2 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]


Chapter review and feedback

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Overall[edit source]

A great attempt, and a very important issue close to many peoples hearts

Theory[edit source]

The chapter covered 2 theories in relative detail and demonstrated a fair understanding, well done. To improve in the future, engage in some critical analysis of the theories

Research[edit source]

There was some interesting research covered in this chapter, good job. It would have benefited from some more research on examples of experiments regarding environmental behaviour, as well as critical analysis

Written expression[edit source]

The chapter had a reasonable flow, and the layout was engaging and eyecatching. The written expression was a little awkward at times, it can be useful to have someone read over the work before submission The learning features were fantastic, I liked the drop down “take home” messages and the figures added some “pop” to the page. APA was generally solid, well done, I would brush up on your in text citation rules,remember to use APA format for all figures and to incude DOI’s and web addresses for all references. Fantastic job! Courtney.reis (discusscontribs)


Multimedia feedback

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Overall[edit source]

Overall, a good effort. See comments below for feedback

Structure and content[edit source]

The presentation covered the main points of the chapter, good job. There was a good coverage of theory, for future improvement integrate some more of the research into the theory component to add some balance.

Communication[edit source]

The presentation was creative and visually appealing, well done. The presentation also made good use of images, but the presentation could benefit from some inclusion of real world examples/how to apply the theory in a self-help manner. The voiceover was very fuzzy and unclear, and unfortunately made it quite difficult to understand.

Production quality[edit source]

The visual quality of the presentation was good, and made use of basic tools to great effect. As above, to improve audio quality of the presentation perhaps rerecord via a different mechanism. Remember to include licensing information. Good effort! Courtney.reis (discusscontribs)